ej's writing week 5

One day there was a girl named susan was going to meet her friend at her house. Then she knock at the door but nobody answered so she open the door and tiptoed in. She went in the spooky house looking for her friend but she couldn't find her. She was about to leave then a man came and found her in the house. Then she tried to escape but she couldn't she screamed in terror the the floor fell apart and she fell. She was very terrified she thought why it happening to her she was about to was going to let tears out. Then when she reach the bottom somebody nice caut her. She told what had happen Then They tried their best to help her escape. They found a hole in the wall a tried to make it bigger.Than the man that made her fall saw them digging a hole out he tried to catch in the Tunnel but they escaped. They try digging under but it didn't work either. So they just waited till it was night Then they would plan there escape. It became night the girl was going to escape. They saw the man and he was sleeping they knew it was a perfect time to escape. Then they got out the man woke up he tried to catch up but she was to fast so she got to her house and closed all the window and locked all the doors and stayed safe. then she never wanted to go back to the creepy house ever again.