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Tuesday 19 September 2017

the gruffalo

                    The gruffalo
The gruffalo is hideous because it gots a poisonous wart at the end nose. The gruffalo is hideous because it gots a black tongue. The gruffalo because it is  got black wobbly  knees. The gruffalo has purple  spikes on his back. The gruffalo has ugly teeth.

1 comment:

  1. The words you have used to describe the Gruffalo are very interesting. However, you need to go back and re read your sentences, E.J. Check if they make sense?

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