The gruffalo is hideous because it gots a poisonous wart at the end nose. The gruffalo is hideous because it gots a black tongue. The gruffalo because it is got black wobbly knees. The gruffalo has purple spikes on his back. The gruffalo has ugly teeth.
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The words you have used to describe the Gruffalo are very interesting. However, you need to go back and re read your sentences, E.J. Check if they make sense?
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