Write a piece of writing telling me why sleep is important to you.
Remember to:
- Use your plan to help you remember what you need to write about.
- Writing must have an introduction, 3 paragraphs and a conclusion.
- A paragraph needs to be three ideas or more.
- You must get a partner to proofread your work after you have checked it.
Why is sleeping important
We should get more sleep because it could be very dangerous
We should be getting more sleep because if we are doing a job we could fall asleep and we could run somebody over.
We should get more sleep because if we don’t get enough sleep it makes it hard to contract on what the teacher is telling us.
We should get more sleep because it help us to grow and it reprises our body and it makes us smarter.
We should get more sleep because it is a really important thing because and it is good for your environment.
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