They had arrived out of the blue, catching everyone completely unaware.
Striding through the vast expanse of ocean as if it were nothing more than a shallow puddle, the trolls provided the gathering crowd on the cliff tops with a menacing spectacle. They were enormous! Grotesque!
The whole cliff shook as one of them crunched a meaty, clumsy hand the size of an elephant into the rock face which was looking at a solar panel and was confused so he just walk past it and chased humans while he was walking trees fell and killed people. Then more trolls came for there village and more then soon half of the world had been attacked by trolls.
I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
What a captivating and interesting story, E.J. I really liked the vocabulary you used particularly 'grotesque' that makes me think of something really disgusting! Do the trolls eat humans?
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