I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, 29 September 2017
The Gruffalo
The gruffalo
The gruffalo is hideous because it gots a poisonous wart at the end nose. The gruffalo is hideous because it gots a black tongue. The gruffalo because it is got black wobbly knees. The gruffalo has purple spikes on his back. The gruffalo has ugly teeth.
Tuesday, 19 September 2017
the gruffalo
The gruffalo
The gruffalo is hideous because it gots a poisonous wart at the end nose. The gruffalo is hideous because it gots a black tongue. The gruffalo because it is got black wobbly knees. The gruffalo has purple spikes on his back. The gruffalo has ugly teeth.
we should get more sleep
Write a piece of writing telling me why sleep is important to you.
Remember to:
- Use your plan to help you remember what you need to write about.
- Writing must have an introduction, 3 paragraphs and a conclusion.
- A paragraph needs to be three ideas or more.
- You must get a partner to proofread your work after you have checked it.
Why is sleeping important
We should get more sleep because it could be very dangerous
We should be getting more sleep because if we are doing a job we could fall asleep and we could run somebody over.
We should get more sleep because if we don’t get enough sleep it makes it hard to contract on what the teacher is telling us.
We should get more sleep because it help us to grow and it reprises our body and it makes us smarter.
We should get more sleep because it is a really important thing because and it is good for your environment.
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