I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi EJ I like your post about about top drop strategy. Maybe next time you could make sure the reader can understand what you have written. Keep up the good work EJ. Maty Ahipara school.
Hi EJ I like your strategy. Maybe next time you could make sure the reader can understand what you have written. Keep up the good work EJ. Daz Ahipara school.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi EJ I like your post about about top drop strategy. Maybe next time you could make sure the reader can understand what you have written. Keep up the good work EJ. Maty Ahipara school.
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ReplyDeleteHi EJ, I really like your blog post about top drop strategy. Maybe next time you could check your spelling. Keep up the good work. From Lacey.
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