I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ej i´m Roscoe from Ahipara school. I like your slide about how to make lemon pie. Maybe next time you could show us a picture of the lemon pie great job.
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ReplyDeleteThis is an awesome post. I f you could add more detail like pictures it would be more awesome. I never knew how to make a Lemon Pie until know.
ReplyDeleteHi Ej i´m Roscoe from Ahipara school. I like your slide about how to make lemon pie. Maybe next time you could show us a picture of the lemon pie great job.
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